Two Daffodils

did those outstanding daffodils withstand;
their feet were frozen last night;
or had they one last stand…

sparring midnight, did my love’s hand snip them,
gently warm them in a vase;
their faces greeting mine…

i did not send my spouse onto the hill;
too steep and cold for bare feet;
reprise of Spring will hail.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hind Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 7:17 PM
Aw, this is an endearing piece of poetry - really love the small things you write of
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 5:07 AM
I am so glad you like this one! <3
Wolf Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 3:43 PM
Heroic.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 4:11 PM
Could have been! LOL
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