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Two Daffodils

did those outstanding daffodils withstand; their feet were frozen last night; or had they one last stand… sparring midnight, did my love’s hand snip them, gently warm them in a vase; their faces greeting mine… i did not send my spouse onto the hill; too steep and cold for bare feet; reprise of Spring will hail.

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Date: 3/21/2025 7:17:00 PM
Aw, this is an endearing piece of poetry - really love the small things you write of
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2025 5:07:00 AM
I am so glad you like this one! <3
Date: 3/21/2025 3:43:00 PM
Heroic.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2025 4:11:00 PM
Could have been! LOL

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