Two Black Birds

Two black doves,
were not black before.
Will not spread their wings;
...to fly.

Two black beaks,
days before were orange.
Vomiting the black; - trembling;
faces to the sand.

Two black birds,
writhing in solitude;
...fading away, eyes turning gray;

the oceanographers say they died of poison.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 2:06 PM
Thank you for sharing you poetry with us Michael. I enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Hope you have a wonderful weekend running over with inspiration. The best to you in The Oil Spill contest. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 3:49 AM
Wonderful thought on the recent tragedy
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