Two Birds In Heat

they’re looking for love the pleasure of their singsong — a broadway duet 4/30/2021

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Date: 5/4/2021 7:55:00 AM

Ah, I can visualize it and I smile.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2021 2:25:00 AM

Yay! :)

Date: 5/3/2021 6:40:00 PM

He must sing, and sing, only then he will find a mate... Beautiful poem

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2021 4:00:00 AM

What you say reminds me of the phantom urging Christine to sing for him.

Date: 4/30/2021 9:06:00 AM

And this duet sings unmasked, to boot! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2021 9:51:00 AM

So true!

Date: 4/30/2021 6:31:00 AM

Melody of nature's symphony, my dearest friend, Kim. Wonderfully depicted. Hugs xxx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2021 9:46:00 AM

Thank you! Hugs...Kim

Date: 4/30/2021 6:05:00 AM

Mating brings male songs. Let him be on top of his abilities. She'll fly away otherwise. Lovely haiku.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2021 9:44:00 AM

Thank you :)

Date: 4/30/2021 5:27:00 AM

I hear the mating songs--excellent imagery, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2021 5:34:00 AM

Thank you! The birdsong call this morning was brilliant!