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Two Birds

The Tao stares at its reflection on a lake as two birds.

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/14/2016 11:49:00 AM

Awesome monoku Teddy. It deepens with each read.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/15/2016 7:46:00 AM

Thanks Lenny, for enjoying my line!!! :-)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/1/2016 12:03:00 AM

Yin and yang ... an excellent interpretation, Teddy. Really love the monoku that try and go beyond the immediately obvious, and I think this one does that.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/15/2016 7:44:00 AM

Thank you so much Timothy!!! :-) I'm really amazed by your interpretation!!!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/30/2016 3:04:00 PM

I like the originality of your take on this visual, Teddy! Congratulations on this fine win. // paul

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/15/2016 7:41:00 AM

Thank you so much Paul!!! :-)

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 3/30/2016 9:08:00 AM

Congratulations Teddy on your remarkable win. You never failed to write a jaw-dropping poem! You truly are praiseworthy! Keep up the good work and continue to enjoy the blessings of words and poetry. :) -HANSv

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/15/2016 7:40:00 AM

Thank you so much Hans!!! :-) Those are uplifting words indeed!!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/29/2016 3:32:00 AM

Brilliant take Teddy.. congrats on big win!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/29/2016 5:01:00 PM

Thank you very much Dr. Upma!!! :-)

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/27/2016 12:59:00 PM

Congrats on your win my lovely friend with this beautiful poem. Loved always, bl

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/29/2016 5:00:00 PM

Thank you so much BL!!! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2016 12:44:00 PM

Very cool, and congrats on the winner list.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/29/2016 4:59:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea!!! *^_^*

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/27/2016 12:11:00 PM

Hi Teddy, Congratulations on your win in the contest. An excellent write as always. This one goes into my faves....MIKE.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/29/2016 4:55:00 PM

Thank you for your applause, Mike, and also glad you enjoy my verses!!! :-)

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/27/2016 4:46:00 AM

Very good line. Congratulations...

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/29/2016 4:52:00 PM

Thank you so much Probir!! ;-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/27/2016 12:02:00 AM

Teddy, Congratulations on your awesome WIN. Thank you for supporting my one line verse contest. Stop by my latest blog "Do You See What I See? if you like." Happy Easter. Love LINDA

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/29/2016 4:50:00 PM

Hi Linda. I was far away from technology during Easter, lol. Thanks for your applause and adding me in your cute blog!!! *^_^*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2016 3:12:00 PM

Very interesting and philosophical.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/15/2016 7:26:00 PM

Thanks Andrea *^_^*