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Two Birds

The Tao stares at its reflection on a lake as two birds.

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Lenny Gazbowski

April 14, 2016 at 11:49 AM

Awesome monoku Teddy. It deepens with each read.

Teddy Kimathi

April 15, 2016 at 7:46 AM

Thanks Lenny, for enjoying my line!!! :-)

Timothy Hicks

April 1, 2016 at 12:03 AM

Yin and yang ... an excellent interpretation, Teddy. Really love the monoku that try and go beyond the immediately obvious, and I think this one does that.

Teddy Kimathi

April 15, 2016 at 7:44 AM

Thank you so much Timothy!!! :-) I'm really amazed by your interpretation!!!

Paul Callus

March 30, 2016 at 3:04 PM

I like the originality of your take on this visual, Teddy! Congratulations on this fine win. // paul

Teddy Kimathi

April 15, 2016 at 7:41 AM

Thank you so much Paul!!! :-)

Hansteven Selfa

March 30, 2016 at 9:08 AM

Congratulations Teddy on your remarkable win. You never failed to write a jaw-dropping poem! You truly are praiseworthy! Keep up the good work and continue to enjoy the blessings of words and poetry. :) -HANSv

Teddy Kimathi

April 15, 2016 at 7:40 AM

Thank you so much Hans!!! :-) Those are uplifting words indeed!!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

March 29, 2016 at 3:32 AM

Brilliant take Teddy.. congrats on big win!

Teddy Kimathi

March 29, 2016 at 5:01 PM

Thank you very much Dr. Upma!!! :-)

Bl Devnath

March 27, 2016 at 12:59 PM

Congrats on your win my lovely friend with this beautiful poem. Loved always, bl

Teddy Kimathi

March 29, 2016 at 5:00 PM

Thank you so much BL!!! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

March 27, 2016 at 12:44 PM

Very cool, and congrats on the winner list.

Teddy Kimathi

March 29, 2016 at 4:59 PM

Thank you so much Andrea!!! *^_^*

Vladislav Raven

March 27, 2016 at 12:11 PM

Hi Teddy, Congratulations on your win in the contest. An excellent write as always. This one goes into my faves....MIKE.

Teddy Kimathi

March 29, 2016 at 4:55 PM

Thank you for your applause, Mike, and also glad you enjoy my verses!!! :-)

Probir Gupta

March 27, 2016 at 4:46 AM

Very good line. Congratulations...

Teddy Kimathi

March 29, 2016 at 4:52 PM

Thank you so much Probir!! ;-)

Poet Destroyer A

March 27, 2016 at 12:02 AM

Teddy, Congratulations on your awesome WIN. Thank you for supporting my one line verse contest. Stop by my latest blog "Do You See What I See? if you like." Happy Easter. Love LINDA

Teddy Kimathi

March 29, 2016 at 4:50 PM

Hi Linda. I was far away from technology during Easter, lol. Thanks for your applause and adding me in your cute blog!!! *^_^*