Twitter

A give me, a sweet
In a little basket, tweet
Full of goodies, to eat
And grass to nap on, sheet
Joining the nature in harmony, meet
Joining forces full of torches, wit
Everyday is a treat.

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Emmanuel Brian Oule

March 30, 2015 at 9:46 AM

Good rhyme, yayi, I personally like to tweet Nice one

Emmanuel Brian Oule

April 8, 2015 at 11:17 PM

you too be one of a kind blessed too

Njeri Hunjeri

April 8, 2015 at 3:43 AM

Thank you Bryan. Be blessed.

Funom Makama

March 26, 2015 at 12:08 PM

This is a well thought piece, showcasing the tender make up of your soul and the immense creativity, so rich in your mind. I so love this and thanks a lot for sharing..

Njeri Hunjeri

March 29, 2015 at 1:09 AM

Thank you so much Funom for this visit.

Hannington Mumo

March 26, 2015 at 5:46 AM

Your adventurous poetic style leaves a lot to be desired. Kudos!

Njeri Hunjeri

March 28, 2015 at 8:59 AM

Thank u Hannington, that means a lot to me.

Asma Memon

March 25, 2015 at 4:55 PM

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Njeri Hunjeri

March 28, 2015 at 8:58 AM

Thank you.

Louis Spence

March 25, 2015 at 4:13 PM

Thank you Njeri for your kind comment on my youtube video of Red ( Boro Red). Your wee poem above Twitter is fun. And the last line says it all - there is an old Spanish saying - if you cant get what you want, want what you get. Happiness is an inside thing - that is a quote by Mike Tyson, boxer, of all people!

Njeri Hunjeri

March 28, 2015 at 8:57 AM

Lol Mike Tyson said that?! Interesting. I really like the Spanish saying. Thank you Louis. Good day.

Asma Memon

March 25, 2015 at 4:55 PM

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