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Twisted popcorn lace decorates
The eastern pale blue sky
A canopy of delight hangs
Miles and miles up high

Upon the eastern horizon
An orange sun seeks to climb
Across the sun streaks of purple clouds
The sun arrives just in time

Apricot jam slathered across
Dripping stickily on pines
Silhouetting an outline there
Of oaks and pines combined

Thank you, God, for the beautiful
Artistic scene on the sky
A few moments to watch nature
And swallows dart and fly 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/2/2015 9:30:00 PM
you need to write one on digging taters. I might too. lol
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Date: 6/2/2015 9:29:00 PM
The poem is great here except the last verse seems off on flow. so beautiful Artistic scene painted high...
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Date: 5/30/2015 12:18:00 PM
sara, this is amazing imagery from you. One of your best poems. A fave!
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Date: 5/29/2015 10:10:00 PM
Sara, your words have painted a beautiful picture! Lovely write. Love, Kim
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Date: 5/29/2015 5:51:00 PM
G'day Sara... a nice write about sunrise. Every morning we capture a different scene - thank you - Lindsay
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