Twisted Or Untwisted

Twisted or untwisted,
distorted, coiled, warped,
entwinded and interwoven,
aberrancies cavort.

Sleeping in the sun room,
mattress on the floor,
we thought that was cool then,
back in 1974.

The sun's glare woke me up,
but I kept my eyes shut tight.
Still, with my eyelids firmly closed,
the room was brutally bright.

I was just relaxing there,
waking and clearing my head,
when I felt my cat step up
on the foot of my pallet-like bed.

I felt the weight of him walking
and I heard his happy purr.
He laid down between my legs
and I stretched to stroke his fur.

He started "making buscuits"
on the inside of my thigh,
his claws were out, it hurt a bit,
and he was kneeding a little high.

My right hand was still petting him-
my right hand was on his head,
and then I opened up my eyes
and my stomach lurched with dread.

I stared in disbelief because
HE WAS NO LONGER THERE,
he had simply vanished,
was gone into thin air.

I have no explanation,
it's too twisted to untwist,
but I swear this really happened,
and my awe of it persists.

Twisted and untwisted,
reality's illusions,
it all adds up cosmically,
to circumspect confusion.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 8:29 AM
Danielle, thank your for your support in my contest with this poem. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
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February 27, 2010 at 4:14 PM
congratulations Danielle on this eerie beaut! Because it adds up cosmically to circumspect confusion!!! Cool - Robert
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February 27, 2010 at 7:36 AM
Very spooky poem, Danielle. Enjoyed reading this one very much. Congratulations on your success in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 7:25 AM
Congrats Danielle on your winning poem and placement in Moses contest.. a wonderful write and wonderful win for an amazing lady and poetess.. luv.. Linda-Marie
Freeman Avatar
January 22, 2010 at 10:44 AM
Danielle, I want to most graciously thank you for your support of my contest. Sincerely, Love, Moses
Townsend Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 8:10 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win. Excellent writing. Smiles from Lolita
Richards Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 5:22 PM
What a terrific poem....I could feel the chills!! Congrats on your win in the contest, Danielle !! (ps...soup mail reply)
Winter Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 2:02 PM
Congrats Danielle on your excellent win! Love, Shar
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May 25, 2009 at 1:13 AM
Congrats on your success in Michael's contest Danielle.Rgds Brian
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May 24, 2009 at 1:35 PM
Danielle, congrats in placing in Michael's contest...Raul
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