Twisted Love

As I stand and look at you
I see the ropes around your neck
Can't you see what you do for me
How it makes me come alive inside

It  leads  me places I cannot hide
I see the fear within your eyes
I see your emotions laid bare for me

As I watch the way you react to me 
You take me places I long to be 
This is the way I was taught to be

And I can not go all by myself  So 
I hope you forgive me for the things 
I'm about to do to you and with you 
I see it in your face you long for  it 

For the things, I long to do to you
I know that you understand inside
 For what we are about to do 
 I know that you forgive me too

These feelings just come over me
I need the presence of a warm body
To take me where I wanna  be 
  
I just can't help myself you see
Something just takes over me
When I'm done with you 
I promise to set you free
I'm not playing tricks on you

I'll lay you to rest with the others
It really touches me to see you cry
I know it's because you care for me
And it truly makes me come alive

It's only a matter of time you know
This just might be your last day alive
So maybe you might try to be happy

This is the only way I feel alive
I'm bleeding for you truly I am 
Can't you see how I feel inside 

Tell me you love me before you die
Can't you see this  is the only way
It's the only way I feel alive inside!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Beaufort Avatar
April 23, 2017 at 7:41 AM
You are such a passionate person, and the way you express your feelings is extravagant and beautiful. There is an elegance to the strength of your passion. Quite remarkable.
Reams Avatar
April 3, 2015 at 7:50 AM
Fantastic write! I love the creepiness about the poem.
Johnson Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 1:33 AM
a need to feed spider like, upon a serving mate, the price of death the deadly bite, some food upon your plate, the cost of sweet delight...
Duncan Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 9:20 AM
Hello Don ;}
Seraphin Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 6:44 PM
* "I LOVE THIS SWEET, SWEET TWIST UPON DESIRES FIRES * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL DEBBIE * TAKE ME & HAVE ME AS YOUR LOVELY DOES PLEASE * I PROMISE I SHALL ENJOY IT TOO * EVERYTHING YOU DO * I PROMISE I WON'T CRY BUT * I'M SURE THAT I WILL SIGH *.* LOVE IT LOVE LOVE IT * THANK YOU * A JOY TO FIND YOUR BEAUTIES SPLENDOURS * INSIDE MY COM BOX * HAPPY HOLIDAYS SWEET LADY * MY LUV ALWAYS * SARAH." *
Devonshire Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 11:04 AM
Beautifully written, Deb. Indeed, our days are numbered, but feeling love makes us feel alive. Best wishes, Carolyn
Duncan Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 8:57 PM
thank you ;}
Brown Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 12:26 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Debbie. Have yourself a wonderful inspiration filled weekend I will be back to read more Monday. Love, Carol
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