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Twisted Love

As I stand and look at you
I see the ropes around your neck
Can't you see what you do for me
How it makes me come alive inside

It  leads  me places I cannot hide
I see the fear within your eyes
I see your emotions laid bare for me

As I watch the way you react to me 
You take me places I long to be 
This is the way I was taught to be

And I can not go all by myself  So 
I hope you forgive me for the things 
I'm about to do to you and with you 
I see it in your face you long for  it 

For the things, I long to do to you
I know that you understand inside
 For what we are about to do 
 I know that you forgive me too

These feelings just come over me
I need the presence of a warm body
To take me where I wanna  be 
  
I just can't help myself you see
Something just takes over me
When I'm done with you 
I promise to set you free
I'm not playing tricks on you

I'll lay you to rest with the others
It really touches me to see you cry
I know it's because you care for me
And it truly makes me come alive

It's only a matter of time you know
This just might be your last day alive
So maybe you might try to be happy

This is the only way I feel alive
I'm bleeding for you truly I am 
Can't you see how I feel inside 

Tell me you love me before you die
Can't you see this  is the only way
It's the only way I feel alive inside!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/23/2017 7:41:00 AM
You are such a passionate person, and the way you express your feelings is extravagant and beautiful. There is an elegance to the strength of your passion. Quite remarkable.
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Date: 4/11/2017 5:07:00 PM
wow Debbie my eye browse came together , brilliant write
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Date: 4/3/2015 7:50:00 AM
Fantastic write! I love the creepiness about the poem.
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Date: 9/20/2012 1:33:00 AM
a need to feed spider like, upon a serving mate, the price of death the deadly bite, some food upon your plate, the cost of sweet delight...
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 2/27/2013 9:20:00 AM
Hello Don ;}
Date: 12/6/2011 6:44:00 PM
* "I LOVE THIS SWEET, SWEET TWIST UPON DESIRES FIRES * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL DEBBIE * TAKE ME & HAVE ME AS YOUR LOVELY DOES PLEASE * I PROMISE I SHALL ENJOY IT TOO * EVERYTHING YOU DO * I PROMISE I WON'T CRY BUT * I'M SURE THAT I WILL SIGH *.* LOVE IT LOVE LOVE IT * THANK YOU * A JOY TO FIND YOUR BEAUTIES SPLENDOURS * INSIDE MY COM BOX * HAPPY HOLIDAYS SWEET LADY * MY LUV ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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Date: 6/19/2011 11:04:00 AM
Beautifully written, Deb. Indeed, our days are numbered, but feeling love makes us feel alive. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 9/5/2011 8:57:00 PM
thank you ;}
Date: 6/17/2011 12:26:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Debbie. Have yourself a wonderful inspiration filled weekend I will be back to read more Monday. Love, Carol
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