Twisted Lies

Just go and leave me, I don't Care!!
I tried to make you see who I am ,
But you saw  right through like I was glass,
I tried to tell you this is who I am ,I am not gonna change,
I always tried to be the best I can be,compromising myself for you,
But it wasn't enough for you so I just don't care anymore,
I am not going to be someone you want  me to be ,
This love is insane,
You tell me cut my hair cause you didn't like it,
But I don't care I'm not gonna change it.
All you tell me is lies,your silence says it all,
You didn't have to admit ,I knew.
I swear you make me sick,
I tried and tried to be what you wanted but I lost who I was,
Just leave me alone ,I just don't care any more,
Don't come back with your tears,because I would be gone,
I forgive you but I am not going to be with you.
I just don't care ,you tried to fool me ,
But you fooled yourself ,
You were the one that messed up and you tried to blame me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/13/2011 6:25:00 AM
lol Thanks Carol you would be surprised where I get my inspiration ...
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Date: 4/13/2011 6:22:00 AM
What a beautiful sunny day here at my house. I am so happy to be able to read your excellent poetry this morning Shivanee. I hope you will enjoy your day and that you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2011 12:33:00 PM
as long as you are really trying to be the very best you can for you and God..that is all that matters right?
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Date: 4/12/2011 12:32:00 PM
sounds intriguing good post...on the right holiday today!
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