Twist To Open

Twist to open
buyer beware
secret entrance
to devil's lair
drowning troubles
makes them worse
twist to open
another curse
family gone
along with pride
time to try
the other side
God forgive me
help me stand
want to see
the promised land
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 8:28 PM
I did enjoyed to read this poem. I also would like to read more. Have a nice evening my friend.
Timperley Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 3:02 PM
Great write Lary, hope to read more when I am less tired. Until the accept a 7. God Bless. D.
Brown Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 10:19 AM
Good morning Lary. Thank you for sharing your fantastic poetry today. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
Christian Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 10:15 AM
aww a wonderful write, this is so uplifting, a great powerful prayer here Lary God bless you
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