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Twist To Open

Twist to open
buyer beware
secret entrance
to devil's lair
drowning troubles
makes them worse
twist to open
another curse
family gone
along with pride
time to try
the other side
God forgive me
help me stand
want to see
the promised land

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/11/2017 8:28:00 PM
I did enjoyed to read this poem. I also would like to read more. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 10/16/2016 3:02:00 PM
Great write Lary, hope to read more when I am less tired. Until the accept a 7. God Bless. D.
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Date: 8/15/2009 10:19:00 AM
Good morning Lary. Thank you for sharing your fantastic poetry today. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2009 10:15:00 AM
aww a wonderful write, this is so uplifting, a great powerful prayer here Lary God bless you
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