Russell Sivey Poet Rhyme

Twirl In Adolescence

Swirling down from a dark sky
Stars that flicker by
We twirl in adolescence
Hoping not to die
Living by the grace
Smiling at benevolence
Her warm loving face

Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich November 3, 2012 at 1:36 AM very very lovely.

Cory Long November 2, 2012 at 7:51 PM nicely penned.. love the picture you paint. hugs cory

Poet Destroyer A November 2, 2012 at 12:40 PM Russell, love the nice warm feeling... thank you for sharing..pd

Nette Onclaud November 2, 2012 at 11:20 AM a very haunting and beautifully scribed piece, russell... the message behind this is just wonderful as well; how tremendously inspiring..:) huggs ( i donned a tutu for halloween, lol!)