Twins

harbingers of spring
two robins pecking the ground
arrived back early

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Jancarl Campi

Date: 6/1/2011 10:00:00 AM

HI, Carol! This is a nice haiku. Spring has sprung and summer is here. already to hot to stay outside past 1100am. My wife sure watches over me. I do push myself a bit too far at times. Take care and God bless, Jancarl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2011 1:52:00 PM

Carol great haiku,.. have your self a wonderful MOTHERS DAY tomorrow... celebrate with smiles ... take care..P.D.

Kash Poet

Date: 4/8/2011 8:28:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku on advent of Spring,Carol-kashinath

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/5/2011 5:23:00 PM

Yes, Mom always said robins were the first signs of spring and they were so welcome in our yard. You brought back some great memories in your delightful haiku, Carol. Thanks so much for sharing it. Love, Carolyn

James Foulk

Date: 4/5/2011 9:25:00 AM

love any kind of poem about robins, i written a number of them myself, this one was a great Haiku and enjoyed reading it. thank you for reading my the pond and for your comments. and i hope your cold is better, this time of year it is so hard to shake off a cold, because of the weather change, you know warm one day cold the next. have a nice day.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/5/2011 5:08:00 AM

Hearing them sing is so beautiful and u were correct Carol.. saw one this early morn in the Spring rain .. on my porch.. but by the time I got to my camera phone.. all gone.. hoping it will return.. so lovely .. these creations of God.. for us to enjoy ..as much as I enjoy your sweet poetry ..luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/4/2011 3:07:00 PM

Longing to see this vision soon Carol on my front lawn or garden in back or surrounding trees.. visions of Spring so sweetly penned my friend.. a delightful Haiku luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/4/2011 1:14:00 PM

What a cute and keen observation, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/4/2011 1:03:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today and will be back again soon to read more Carol. May you have a week of good health, joy and sunshine to light up your life. Love, Carol

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