Mohan Chutani Poet Verse

Twinkling Stars

twinkle of distant stars 
and their positions in space
hold keys to our destiny
some of us believe

enchanting star patterns get
formed by those departed 
remind us they remain 
forever in our hearts 

the angels dance free
to the tune of their shimmer
we humans on earth let 
their glow within us glimmer 



by: Mohan Chutani
Contest: Shine with your Naani (4 lines per stanza, 25 syllable count per stanza, 3 stanzas)
Date write 18.6.2014
Form: verse
used  howmanyllables.com as syl counter

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Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2014 at 3:44 PM :) PD

Poet Destroyer A July 4, 2014 at 10:08 AM wonderful win..PD Mohan Chutani July 4, 2014 at 10:20 AM Thanks.

Robert Johnson July 4, 2014 at 9:10 AM A beautiful sentiment runs through this Mohan. Congrats. Mohan Chutani July 4, 2014 at 10:20 AM Thanks Robert for kind comments. Mohan

Joseph May July 1, 2014 at 6:34 PM Very nice write Mohan...congrats on your win Mohan Chutani July 1, 2014 at 9:36 PM Good Morning and thanks Joseph. Mohan

Nette Onclaud July 1, 2014 at 4:02 PM i can;t have enough of this shimmering piece flowing so smoothly, mohan.. thanks for gracing my contest and sweet congrats on your fine win.. huggs Mohan Chutani July 1, 2014 at 9:38 PM Nette, good morning and thanks for placing me well again. your contest evoked some of the very beautiful imagery by all the winners. Mohan

Pandita Sietesantos July 1, 2014 at 1:27 PM Hi Mohan - Bravo on your fine win - well deserved, my friend! This is such a lovely write! Mohan Chutani July 1, 2014 at 9:40 PM Good Morning and warmest thanks again Pandita. Mohan

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 1, 2014 at 1:03 PM Well done naanis Mohan ,, shining real bright ,, congrats on huge win! Mohan Chutani July 1, 2014 at 1:08 PM Thanks Upma, and congratulations for your great naanis and win as well. I was about to visit your page to do that. Mohan

Paul Callus July 1, 2014 at 11:52 AM Lovely poem, Mohan, especially the third naani. Congrats on your fine win. // paul Mohan Chutani July 1, 2014 at 12:18 PM Paul, Thanks for your ever cherished support. Mohan

Dr.Ram Mehta July 1, 2014 at 10:35 AM Beautiful imagery, Mohan, Congrats on the win, Mohan Chutani July 1, 2014 at 12:17 PM Thanks Dr. Ram. Also congratulations on your own fine win in the contest. Mohan

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 18, 2014 at 4:56 AM :) the third stanza.. :) i love the imagery it created.. :D wow... i want that.. :) GBU.... OLive Eloisa Mohan Chutani June 18, 2014 at 5:33 AM I am glad you liked it Olive. Mohan