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twinkle of distant stars and their positions in space hold keys to our destiny some of us believe enchanting star patterns get formed by those departed remind us they remain forever in our hearts the angels dance free to the tune of their shimmer we humans on earth let their glow within us glimmer by: Mohan Chutani Contest: Shine with your Naani (4 lines per stanza, 25 syllable count per stanza, 3 stanzas) Date write 18.6.2014 Form: verse used howmanyllables.com as syl counter

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Date: 7/23/2014 3:44:00 PM
:) PD
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Date: 7/4/2014 10:08:00 AM
wonderful win..PD
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/4/2014 10:20:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 7/4/2014 9:10:00 AM
A beautiful sentiment runs through this Mohan. Congrats.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/4/2014 10:20:00 AM
Thanks Robert for kind comments. Mohan
Date: 7/1/2014 6:34:00 PM
Very nice write Mohan...congrats on your win
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/1/2014 9:36:00 PM
Good Morning and thanks Joseph. Mohan
Date: 7/1/2014 4:02:00 PM
i can;t have enough of this shimmering piece flowing so smoothly, mohan.. thanks for gracing my contest and sweet congrats on your fine win.. huggs
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/1/2014 9:38:00 PM
Nette, good morning and thanks for placing me well again. your contest evoked some of the very beautiful imagery by all the winners. Mohan
Date: 7/1/2014 1:27:00 PM
Hi Mohan - Bravo on your fine win - well deserved, my friend! This is such a lovely write!
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/1/2014 9:40:00 PM
Good Morning and warmest thanks again Pandita. Mohan
Date: 7/1/2014 1:03:00 PM
Well done naanis Mohan ,, shining real bright ,, congrats on huge win!
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/1/2014 1:08:00 PM
Thanks Upma, and congratulations for your great naanis and win as well. I was about to visit your page to do that. Mohan
Date: 7/1/2014 11:52:00 AM
Lovely poem, Mohan, especially the third naani. Congrats on your fine win. // paul
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/1/2014 12:18:00 PM
Paul, Thanks for your ever cherished support. Mohan
Date: 7/1/2014 10:35:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Mohan, Congrats on the win,
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/1/2014 12:17:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Ram. Also congratulations on your own fine win in the contest. Mohan
Date: 6/18/2014 4:56:00 AM
:) the third stanza.. :) i love the imagery it created.. :D wow... i want that.. :) GBU.... OLive Eloisa
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/18/2014 5:33:00 AM
I am glad you liked it Olive. Mohan

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