Twinkling Star Wish

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Written: April 06, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dandelion, damselfly, do you pray. What sort of topics do you often display? A lovely wind blows, oh sweet breeze. A twinkling star, if you so desire to ease. Put a halt to each anxiety and strain. Beyond the expanse of unobstructed stain, Watch delicate petals as they float away. Be mindful, in a spirit of humility sway. As recollections of aesthetic days emerge, Amid an ambiguous disguise may surge. Utterances were composed with confidence. A thoroughly accomplished yarn providence.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/11/2024 11:01:00 AM

SP, I'm wondering if my thoughts are always to be kept as hardened facts or if I can let things be more relaxed going forward. Anxiety just comes sometimes, and I believe I can take solace in what you write here. I need to learn not to take myself too seriously!! Let things go the way they will. Smiling!

Paige Hind

Date: 4/8/2024 8:05:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful. A true piece of poetry- enjoyed

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/6/2024 5:00:00 PM

Your poem captivated me and captured my heart. How often we all sometimes wish for a halt to anxiety and strain. Such lovely words. I also liked 's recollections of aesthetic days emerge, Amid an ambiguous disguise may surge. I also appreciate the humility in your poetic voice. Wishing you a pleasant evening, dear Sotto, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara