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The Seed of Fear, Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star


 

Twinkle, Twinkle

Gleaming diamonds that dot the skies
Peering through the night with trillions of eyes
Behind crescent smiles, you wink a distant threat 
Oh, faceless gaze, how I wonder what you're looking at

You come with shrouds that cloak our sun
As hellfire burn behind the black you've spun
You weave the constellations like gossamer webs
While in wide-eyed wonder, we meander into your nets

Travelers crossing the night have leaned on you so
For your twinkling fingers point which way to go
But as your blinking orbs appraise their every move
You chart our world—every corner, every groove

Trillions of eyes cut across the darkness deep
Tendrils of light rain upon us while we sleep
While crescent grimace whisper into our dreams
Oh, twinkle, twinkle, draw us closer into your seams
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Gasun Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 4:49 AM
Oh, this is absolutely amazing piece! Love the feeling, image, smooth flow of rhyme and everything. So glad to read this gem. Thanks a lot for sharing and belated Congrats on your win! Hugs. God bless you always and your poetry.
Evangeline Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 9:24 AM
Thank you so much, Len! I tried to match the flow of the original Twinkle, Twinkle little star as best as I could, even if I can't fit the exact meter. God bless you too.
Canerdy Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 7:37 AM
WOW! A stalker star~~what a creative approach to the prompt, Vanya! Vividly descriptive. Janice
Evangeline Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 12:49 AM
Thanks Janice. It's partly inspired by a horror manga called Hellstar Remina.
Green Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 11:15 AM
That was nice, sort of dark but illumined as it neared the end
Evangeline Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 12:48 AM
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it
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