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Twinkle, Twinkle

You gaze into the starry night One stands out to catch your sight It twinkles at you rhythmically In a pattern...one-two-three A cosmic message from aFAr CommunIcated through a staR Across the galaxies ON cue It sends the mEssage, I love you

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Len Gasun

Date: 3/11/2023 2:15:00 AM

Wow! So beautiful and sweet. A very lovely rhyme with a very heartwarming message written within this unique and wonderful form of rhyme. Thanks for sharing. Blessings. Hugs

Andres Luis Bigote
Date: 3/11/2023 2:42:00 AM

Thank you

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/10/2023 8:16:00 PM

beautiful, like the messages of stars, looking the skies, i appreciate the style yoo, great poem

Andres Luis Bigote
Date: 3/11/2023 2:42:00 AM

Thank you