Twin Stars

Twin stars in the sky

Flickering eternally

Cosmic becoming!






 
© Demetrios Trifiatis
       17 April 2018

birthworldhaiku

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Vijay Pandit

April 17, 2018 at 6:53 AM

They resemble stars..never seen the three petals sprinkled with gold dust before..unique like your poem, Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 17, 2018 at 11:50 AM

I have a lot of flowers like that my friend, Vijay. They are beautiful and I like their details! Thank you my friend!

Maria Williams

April 17, 2018 at 6:51 AM

A powerful flow of love from thought to pen. Those beautiful flowers really do look like twin stars in a night sky. Wonderful Haiku dearest friend, Demetrios, a fave for me....Maria xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 17, 2018 at 11:48 AM

Thank you for your gracious comment dearest friend, Maria. God bless youxxx

Tom Cunningham

April 17, 2018 at 3:16 AM

There is no better view on a clear night Demetrios. A wonderful masterpiece our creator has painted for us. Tom.

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 17, 2018 at 11:42 AM

I was born in a village up the mountains where we had no electricity therefore you cannot imagine the beauty of the night sky dear, Tom! Thank you my friend