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This poem is about the constelation gemini and its influence in the sky, and how the planets and stars dance with our own destinies.

In the logical part of the everlasting sky,
Waits the first twin of the reasons why.
In the feeling part of the ever changing sky
The other twin loves and then stops to sigh.

Then in between the middle weighs
To catch you off guard day by day
Or maybe that is to the left or right
Fishes swim in the skies at night. 

Choices rock between two skies
Think until you know
Or don't question why

Memories talk as experience fights
Dreams in the sun and deep at night
In the center is the most wise
Between each sign is truth disguised.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 7/2/2025 8:19:00 AM
Beautiful poem.
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Date: 10/24/2023 4:15:00 PM
Very nice!
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Autumn Ehrhardt
Date: 10/30/2023 3:47:00 PM
Karen thank you for reading my work.
Date: 10/22/2023 12:10:00 PM
Your "Twin Skies" is a lovely write. I love the sky by day/night. Have a fun day..............
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Autumn Ehrhardt
Date: 10/30/2023 3:48:00 PM
Paula I had a fun day due to your thoughtful comment

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