Twin Sisters

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Aug. 25, 2024 11.30pm



Mendy and Nancy are twin sisters
With slight difference at each other
Mendy is quite dark and taller
Nancy is white and height’s shorter
They share things and toys together.

Girls clip roses on their curly hair
Wear sweet smiles and dresses with such  flair
Both enjoy drinking hot chocolate
After eating their foods on small plate
When they go to school, they’re never late.

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Len Gasun

Date: 8/30/2024 9:55:00 PM

Nursery Rhymes Contest Judged: 8/27/2024 12:00:00 AM Sponsored by: Eve Roper Place 2 (up to 3 multi-w)

Beata Agustin

Date: 8/28/2024 1:37:00 AM

Wow! Congrats... Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end... God bless you.

Len Gasun
Date: 8/30/2024 9:56:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Beata. God bless you too. Hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 8/25/2024 10:12:00 AM

Dear len this is so cute and so sweet how youv interpreted the picture prompt: i also did on the same one but its very different how i interpreted mine. Lovely names too mendy and nancy, and i can tell you rhyme so well, naturally, a good rhymer you are! I love how beautifully youv paid attention to details of the girls like hair etc: “ When they go to school, they’re never late” such sweet twins! Perfect rhyme! Pleasure reading this! Best wishes for the contest. Sending you always light

Len Gasun
Date: 8/26/2024 7:52:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend Ink.Yes, dear I usually fall on rhymes even if I write free verses. Thank you so much also for the best wishes. Best wishes to you too in contests and in all your writing endeavor. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs