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Twin Flames

Twin flames...igniting sparks Exciting...heads all in a spin Ultimately meant to be Yang to the other's yin She is his golden sunrise, the embers of her smile warm his day He is her moon that illuminates her night sky blanketing her, he sends the sweetest dreams her way They are each other's love potion Inebriated from the start It seems as though they were each born with the key to each other's heart But similar to light sabers that cannot be crossed Overwhelming, such a strong energy can be It can leave them feeling out of control unable to handle it's power consistently So unfortunately, one from the other, they consistently flee... And yet...when one is sad, the other still cries a tear If there is physical pain, love's embrace can be felt even if the other is no where near And so it goes... Will they ever be able to let the flames engulf them? Only God knows... Twin flames...igniting sparks Exciting...heads all in a spin Ultimately meant to be Yang to the other's yin

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Date: 4/5/2016 8:17:00 PM
Hello Dineen, I enjoyed your beautifully, romantic piece! Corey :)
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/6/2016 8:30:00 AM
Hi Corey, happy you enjoyed, and what a lovely compliment! Thank you so much! :)
Date: 3/19/2016 12:59:00 AM
Dineen, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/19/2016 6:48:00 AM
Thank you for that, Skat, appreciated.
Date: 3/16/2016 8:23:00 AM
Greetings Dineen . Congrats for your placement in the contest!!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/19/2016 6:47:00 AM
Hey there Teddy, I appreciate the congratulations. :)
Date: 3/15/2016 7:47:00 PM
Hi Dineen, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoyed the read....Vlad.
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/19/2016 6:45:00 AM
Thank you for saying so Vlad, much appreciated!
Date: 3/13/2016 6:56:00 PM
really enjoyed this! "her night sky..blanketing her"
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/15/2016 9:10:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed Chante, thank you so much. :)
Date: 3/13/2016 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations Dineen on the placement of the contest
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/15/2016 9:06:00 AM
Thank you for your consideration Nayda. I enjoyed participating.
Date: 3/12/2016 8:23:00 PM
you really thought outside the box for this one. Sun vs. moon yet twins of passion. Very nicely done!
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/15/2016 9:03:00 AM
They are complementary. I appreciate your insight and comments Andrea, thank you.
Date: 3/11/2016 12:06:00 AM
The ancient Chinese symbol - nice example of it here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/12/2016 4:34:00 AM
I appreciate your kind comment Matthew, thank you much.
Date: 3/9/2016 7:57:00 PM
Great write Dineen...flames dancing to the tango of love...
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/12/2016 4:32:00 AM
A wonderful dance it is when it happens, thank you Joseph.
Date: 3/9/2016 11:21:00 AM
what a heartfelt, beautiful rhapsody for two... a delight to read you, dineen.. welcome to soup and thanks for your feedback!..huggs
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/12/2016 4:27:00 AM
Thank you for the kind critique and the warm welcome, nette. I enjoyed reading your art, and will return soon!

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