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Twilight's Rays

Twilight's golden rays
 settle softly on window pane
  summer's lullaby,
 On drifting clouds it gently plays
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1/3/17

naturesummerLullabyverse

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 17, 2017 at 7:10 PM

Very nice, Joseph. Congratulations on your win with this fine Quadro. Hugs, Dane Ann

Joseph May

January 20, 2017 at 12:18 PM

Thank you Dane Ann

Charlie Smith

January 17, 2017 at 1:01 PM

Very well done Joseph, congratulations...

Joseph May

January 20, 2017 at 12:18 PM

Thank you Charlie

Joanna Daniel

January 16, 2017 at 2:59 AM

Wow, love your "summer's lullaby":) congratulations, Joseph:)

Joseph May

January 20, 2017 at 12:17 PM

Thank you Jo

Afzal Nusker

January 15, 2017 at 9:50 PM

Amazingly beautiful...It exudes such a soothing sensation. Congrats, Joseph.

Joseph May

January 20, 2017 at 12:17 PM

Thank you Afzal

Andrea Dietrich

January 15, 2017 at 3:34 PM

wow, that third line is so sweet, summer's lullaby, YES. Congrats on a great win, Joseph.

Joseph May

January 20, 2017 at 12:16 PM

Thank you Andrea

Jan Allison

January 15, 2017 at 2:54 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

January 20, 2017 at 12:16 PM

Thank you Jan

Mark Martin

January 15, 2017 at 1:07 PM

Congratulations on your win Joseph! Great imagery! :-)

Joseph May

January 20, 2017 at 11:58 AM

Thank you Mark

Paul Callus

January 15, 2017 at 12:06 PM

You have captured the mellow essence of this picture, Joseph...congratulations on a merited win! // paul

Joseph May

January 20, 2017 at 11:57 AM

Thank you Paul

Nette Onclaud

January 15, 2017 at 11:41 AM

pure rhapsody in such few lines, joseph... i am sending my big congrats with thanks for being part of this spree.. huggs

Joseph May

January 15, 2017 at 1:28 PM

Thank you for my placement Nette

Agnes Krampe

January 15, 2017 at 11:24 AM

Congrats on your win, Joseph. Your quadro is lovely.

Jan Allison

January 13, 2017 at 1:40 PM

Absolutely delightful Jospeh you have interpreted the image so beautifully:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

January 13, 2017 at 9:36 AM

Hi Joseph, Your words compliment the well. It reads like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Joseph May

January 13, 2017 at 10:14 AM

Thank you Alexis

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