Twilight of the Bluejay

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sapphire on sapphire at the rise of jewelled night when the stars flash fire mysterious quest like the wide-eyed owl spying as beauty's fading in the vast deep blue the scarlet sun is sinking like a cherry bomb

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/21/2021 12:44:00 PM

Surrounded in beautiful blues, how delightful.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/21/2021 4:06:00 PM

So glad you enjoyed the scenery. Thank you.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/18/2021 11:01:00 PM

I liked the cherry bomb best. ~~

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/19/2021 11:23:00 AM

Then I'm you didn't miss the sight. Thank you. :=)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/18/2021 7:55:00 PM

This is astonishingly vivid, vibrant imagery, Evelyn. These haikus really take off for me! ~ Winging My Way

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/18/2021 8:23:00 PM

Winging your way? Once again you've made me laugh! Thank you very much for the favorable remarks. Hasta la Vista

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/18/2021 4:56:00 PM

Hi Evelyn, What a lovely string of haikus. I enjoyed the view. I hope your New Year has been going great thus far. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/18/2021 6:36:00 PM

Hi Alexis, my New Year has been great so far, thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed viewing the twilight skies with me. Thank you for the complimentary remarks. Have a nice evening, Evelyn :=)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/18/2021 4:55:00 PM

Wonderful images - "cherry bomb" - love the contrast between red and "vast deep blue," morning and night; twilight and dawn. Beautifully crafted Evelyn. I really enjoyed the intricate steps of the words in your haiku string! Each one could stand on its own. Well done!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/18/2021 6:40:00 PM

I am very encouraged by your love of this poem's contrasts, Sam. Thank you for each kind compliment. Your words mean so much. :=)