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Twilight

dusk sets forest wanes
twilight stalk by clouds
full moon oversees
wind's puff rustles leaves
owl's sense of hearing
pause   seek what are veil

3/26/2021

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 12:50 PM
Congrats, Eve. You described different aspects of the night. Well done.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write and picture. Have a blessed day and Easter...................
Callus Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 9:02 AM
This picture prompt has truly inspired you, Eve. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs & Happy Easter, my friend. // paul
Evans Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 8:43 AM
Congrats, Eve! Cleverly written.
Poet Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 5:05 AM
You penned a wonderful poem with few words and great imagery, Congrats on your well-deserved win. Happy Easter to you and yours. Hugs //Las
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April 1, 2021 at 4:01 AM
Heya Eve, congratulations on your well deserved win, wonderful imagery displayed here, in so few lines, cheers David
Ligon Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 10:23 PM
I love how you have the moon overseeing the scene and the sounds evoked. Congratulations!
Merryman Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 3:28 PM
Wonderful imagery, Eve! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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March 28, 2021 at 12:23 PM
Eve, What nice sights and sounds in the dusk of this gentle Twilight Verse. -Richard
Cunningham Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 2:41 AM
You captured the scene well Eve, Good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 12:12 AM
Elements of the owl are aptly described in this lovely poem.
Y. Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 9:54 PM
WoW! Eve, This is a good entry for the contest.You described the photo and much more. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great evening and weekend.PS; I chose the same photo:-) Alexis Soupmail
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