Twice Born

A gentile man of vivid dreams oft apt to walk at night
Followed where his feet would lead under the pale moon light
When chance he did into a grove of oak and alder trees
He spied a pool of nature's own fed by an ancient spring
There upon he cast his gaze beneath the moon so bright
And saw him something oddly fey revealed with second sight

At once belief that made him he who walked where others went
Faded in the mist of myth and planted there instead
A vision of a greater truth not seen, and yet perceived
From deep within the pool of being, liberation to receive
Reflections at the water's edge revealed his truest form
A life he's yet to realize, or a life he's lived before

For there upon this moon lit night, deep in that ancient wood
Where once there was an aging man an ageless raven stood
Twice born of myst beneath the sky, no longer bound by fear
Casting off his worldly flesh, he leapt into the air
He set his course by moon lit ways, a shadow taking flight
Till found he day light's brilliant rays that freed him from the night." 

                                                                   ~Christopher Thor Britt

The Everything Halloween Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/11/2013 9:03:00 AM
Congrats on your great win, Christopher! All the best my friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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Date: 11/10/2013 1:00:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Christopher,
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Date: 11/9/2013 5:17:00 PM
Christopher, Congratulations on your awesome Halloween win. Love ~ SKAT~
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Date: 10/12/2013 8:19:00 AM
Brilliant write. I think you have an ancient bard walking inside of you. I love the way you weave old and new language.
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 10/15/2013 12:27:00 AM
Funny you should say that. I sometimes feel that I do. When inspiration suddenly envelopes me, I feel as though I simply become a conduit for creativity...I find myself less trying to craft a clever bit of verse, and more simply opening up a vein and letting it flow out as it will.
Date: 10/11/2013 10:37:00 AM
One of the finest writes I've read in sometime. Well done...TAH
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 10/15/2013 12:25:00 AM
Thank you Tobey. After having read some of your excellent verse, that is quite a compliment.
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