Twice As Good

sesame white rice
cold sticky raw eel taste nice… 
rolled in seaweed twice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Hickman Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 6:41 PM
so tasty for so many,,not for me though I love to have my food cooked,,my wife says I like it cooked to death,,but anyway a very very descriptive haiku with adoring rhyme,,Well done,,,Blessings..Cecil
Guzzi Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 3:18 PM
Thanks Robb / no one else liked it LOL, yours is the only comment on reborn which discribes a man falling in love with me? yup/ interest verse above I love Jpanese food! Light & Love
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace