Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

Twice

I never felt the arrow, as cupid loosed his bow

But he must have shot me twice,

For I love her so.










Entry for 2 or 3 LINE POEM any form
Any theme - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Brian Strand
27/11/2017. Placed 3rd.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Gregory Richard Barden December 9, 2017 at 4:43 PM Congrats on your winning placement, Gary - blessings and best wishes! :-) Gary Smith December 10, 2017 at 10:51 AM Thank you Gregory :)

Pegy Rowe December 8, 2017 at 10:22 PM Short but SWEET Gary Smith December 9, 2017 at 4:50 AM Thank you Pegy :)

Susan Ashley December 2, 2017 at 11:24 AM Gary, returning with congratulations on your fine win with this impassioned write. Gary Smith December 2, 2017 at 12:42 PM Thank you Susan :)

Mick Talbot November 29, 2017 at 8:23 AM True love is beautiful, I have got 49 years to thank Cupid for! Seems we have a mutual friend :) Congratulations on your competition win! Gary Smith November 29, 2017 at 8:29 AM Thank you Mick :)

Kim Rodrigues November 28, 2017 at 8:11 PM Aww! Beautiful! Congrats! Gary Smith November 29, 2017 at 7:19 AM Thank you Kim :)

Andrea Dietrich November 28, 2017 at 6:43 PM this is utterly fantastic. I'm faving it!! Gary Smith November 29, 2017 at 7:19 AM Thank you Andrea :)

Paul Callus November 28, 2017 at 5:06 PM A loving and romantic three liner, Gary! Indeed, worthy of its podium finish! Regards // paul Gary Smith November 28, 2017 at 6:34 PM Thank you Paul :)

Janice Canerdy November 28, 2017 at 4:24 PM So sweet! Congrats, Gary! Janice Gary Smith November 28, 2017 at 6:34 PM Thank you Janice :)

Heidi Sands November 28, 2017 at 6:00 AM Very nice Gary. Well done :) Gary Smith November 28, 2017 at 8:27 AM Thank you Heidi :)

Susan Ashley November 27, 2017 at 8:13 PM Gary, impassioned sentiments lovingly and beautifully expressed. Excellent and enjoyed.. Good luck in the contest! Gary Smith November 28, 2017 at 8:28 AM Thank you Susan :)

Dale Gregory Cozart November 27, 2017 at 6:08 PM Good job! This might be a winner. Good luck! Gary Smith November 27, 2017 at 6:15 PM Thank you Dale :)