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Twenty Again

Oh to be twenty again With what I know today Take away some thirty years But let the wisdom stay
by Joe Flach for the Twenty/Twenty contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/25/2012 5:59:00 PM
If I could go back, I would choose 40 actually. I was at my best then and knew a lot too!!
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Date: 2/25/2012 5:58:00 PM
this is SO GOOD. I love how you did it. It has a lot of meat in it!!! Excellent!!
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Date: 2/24/2012 3:47:00 PM
excellent! good luck in the contest! sounds like a winner to me.
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Date: 2/24/2012 2:06:00 PM
Lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it, and I wish I was 20 again myself with the wisdom I know now too, it would make a lots of difference.(smile).
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Date: 2/24/2012 10:50:00 AM
I love this, Joe! I feel the same way. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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