Twelve Apostles

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Written for the contest ‘Biker’s Dozen’. There is some debate around whether a 5/3/5 syllable poem is a haiku, but this form fits the form stipulated in the poem best.

Twelve Apostles Bikers recycled donating organs quite freely

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/1/2018 11:22:00 AM

Hi Michael, Bikers, scooters, cars, planes, ships - everyone needs a faith. Bikers don't have much of a chance to think of it however! Regards, Jennifer

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/27/2018 12:46:00 PM

Great in question haiku, with a macabre them...but then again I like macabre lol...love & parts...^WW^

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 9/29/2018 3:53:00 AM

Thanks Winged Warrior. And here I am thinking of getting a small scooter once I moved to Spain. Many kind wishes, Kai