Tweaking

Tweaking
Spinning faster
Forever speed seeking
Constantly lost to disaster
Master
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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May 14, 2016 at 11:48 AM
Congrats on being featured. love phyl
Foulk Avatar
July 29, 2008 at 1:40 PM
really liked this one it did flow real well. thank you for reading my poem and for your comments. about your friend paint a picture of Lowell ponds sure, but how? plus i took a lot of pictures down there, and it is really not as beautiful as i write it to be. it is more peaceful than beautiful. but in some ways it may but at any rate, how would we do it?
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