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Twas the Night Before

Twas the night before 'Twas the night before Christmas and all around soup Not a poet was writing, no words from the group And I, with my paper and pencil in hand Had just settled down at my new writing stand I wrote out a poem, but waited to post To hope for one poet, well two at the most Then turned off the site as nobody was stirring It was getting late and my eyes they were blurring I thought that tomorrow would be a good time Or maybe the next day to send out my rhyme I closed my computer, it shut with a snap Decided to go take that long winters nap When all of the sudden my phone started dinging Like church bells on Sunday, just constantly ringing With messages falling like snow from the sky One after the other, they did multiply I opened my laptop and clicked on the site And waited until it was glowing so bright When what to my wondering eyes should appear So many soup poets were spreading good cheer I reached for my words and then typing so quick My poem a gift and I felt like Saint Nick When I had to pause and just think for a while Because all I wanted was to bring a smile They don’t need a poem that’s written by me Just nice happy thoughts that each poet could see So I paced and I thought and I thought and I paced Then wrote down some words that I quickly erased I had a few cookies, a nice glass of milk Put on my pajamas, they were made of silk I glanced out the window, the street was aglow With bright colored lights, such a beautiful show Tossed some more tinsel atop of the tree Straightened the star so the neighbors could see Wrapped some more presents with ribbons and bows Not very good and each package it shows Sat down again every thought it was whirling Like red and white sugar on candy canes swirling When suddenly something came clear to my mind Such wonderful words that were happy and kind So I typed out this message to post on the site “Merry Christmas dear Soupers, to all a good write”
11/26/18 Written for: The Night Before Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 12/12/2018 12:36:00 AM
Blessings and sincerest congratulations for your win in Joseph's fun Christmas contest, Chris - I pray you and yours have a happy and healthy holiday season! Keep the ink flowing, my friend! :-)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2018 8:20:00 AM
Thanks again my friend. Just hoping to bring a few holiday smiles to the soup poets. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 12/9/2018 4:46:00 PM
what an original take on the contest Chris, I would have put this gem at the top:-) thanks for your gift of words Chris:-) hugs jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 12/10/2018 9:47:00 AM
Thank you Jan. Hey, you can't win'em all. :)
Date: 11/29/2018 6:46:00 AM
Chris, I just read your poem and it is without a doubt the best Christmas gift I will receive this year. Merry Christmas to a poet who knows how to make people appreciate Christmas.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2018 7:27:00 AM
Thank you so very much Curtis. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one so much. Happy Holidays to you and yours.
Date: 11/28/2018 12:58:00 PM
Chris: May your days be merry and bright; and may all your poems flow just right! (--As this one does). Season's best, my gifted friend! ~ Gershon
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Date: 11/28/2018 1:13:00 PM
Thanks so much GW. I tried to fit Hanukah in there but it just didn't match the rhythm of the flow. :) Best to you and your family my friend.
Date: 11/27/2018 6:55:00 AM
'To all a good write' Well Chris, i know i've just read one of the best (writes), amazing stuff mate. a poem to read over and over again, and i might just do that. Merry Christmas to you..
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Chris Green
Date: 11/27/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thank you so very much Harry. Your kind thoughts are truly appreciated. I am thrilled you enjoyed this as I had a blast writing it.
Date: 11/26/2018 11:10:00 PM
Like all your writes, I love this, Chris! How “nice” to use Soup! GL!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/27/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thanks so very much Kim. I am glad you liked this.
Date: 11/26/2018 10:49:00 PM
Oh, how perfect this poem is, Chris! You captured the meter of the original "Night before Christmas" verse and added some wonderful warmth to personalize it for Soupers. You captured the spirit that makes PS a haven for writers. Truly, this is so refreshing to read. No need for me to send winning wishes -- you have a place at the top reserved! Hugs, Carolyn
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Chris Green
Date: 11/27/2018 8:52:00 AM
Thank you so very much Carolyn, we really are one big family here. And as for the contest, it asked for humor so I don't think this is really funny, but we will see what happens. Thank you again my friend
Date: 11/26/2018 9:56:00 PM
Great write, Chris, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/27/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thank you Eve for always being so kind to me.
Date: 11/26/2018 9:27:00 PM
Great Christmas poem, Chris, I love it. Best of luck in the contest. John
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Date: 11/27/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thanks so much John. I am happy you liked it.
Date: 11/26/2018 8:50:00 PM
G'day Chris … I must say I found your Christmas poem enjoyable to read and I would like to wish you and your family a merry Christmas - Lindsay
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Date: 11/27/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thank you so very much Lindsay for your kind wishes. The same to you and yours.
Date: 11/26/2018 7:18:00 PM
I love how you wrote this one. Sweet! I like the line about the thoughts whirling into the candy canes too. Thanks for sharing and I hope you have a Merry Christmas :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/27/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. I hope you have a wonderful holiday too. Though it is still a bit early, I really wanted to wait until at least December to post this but the contest was filling up fast so I couldn't wait.
Date: 11/26/2018 6:53:00 PM
You have such a wonderful heart my friend. :) This does bring a smile and it will stay for a while. Your thoughts are Jolly, Festive and Sincere. Cute, Clever and Creative. May you have a Very Merry Christmas. ~ Brandy
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Chris Green
Date: 11/27/2018 8:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Brandy. I am thrilled you liked this one. An early Merry Christmas to you as well my friend.

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