Turtle Abab

I would not want to be a turtle. Eating bugs every day, crossing the road is a hurdle. that I face in May. Brian strand's 4 line rhyme contest cory long

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/30/2011 5:05:00 AM

A belated congratulations Cory on your win in Brian Strand's "One Single Four Line" contest. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/24/2011 9:25:00 PM

extraordinary subject, cory.. congrats to you, big time! :) huggs

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/24/2011 9:22:00 PM

Congrats on your win Cory!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/24/2011 4:34:00 PM

way to go cory... congrats on your super win in Brian's contest with this lovable entry my friend..so happy u won ..enjoy with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/24/2011 2:18:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of brian, cory

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2011 2:10:00 PM

I'm glad to see this on the winners' list, Cory. I certainly rememeber this cutie! Congrats to you.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/24/2011 11:39:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Cory. Great write. Nice going. Ralph

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/24/2011 11:25:00 AM

cute one Cory, congrats on your win in the contest.............Francine

Jack Horne

Date: 5/24/2011 10:12:00 AM

LOL Many congrats on your win, Cory : )

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/24/2011 9:46:00 AM

So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Cory. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2011 11:00:00 PM

This is very cute and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for your comment today. Good luck in this contest. Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/22/2011 7:47:00 PM

Very cute entry, Cory. At least turtles have learned to live a slow and easy life, but that's not an asset when trying to cross the road! Best wishes in Brian's contest. Love, Carolyn

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/22/2011 7:41:00 PM

lol. Only a special person could see the plight of animals we insensitives tend to ignore. Good luck with the contest. May you come out tops!! ^__^

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/22/2011 7:08:00 PM

well I tend to agree cory and this is a neat entry full of imagery to glean my friend..good luck in the contest with this unique and original piece luv..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/22/2011 6:58:00 PM

Hey Cory...this is so fun...a turtle rhyme! Good luck with Brian's contest. Hope it won't go real s----l----o---w---! Like a turtle. ha ha. Just kiddin. Gwendolen