Turtle Abab

I would not want to be a turtle.
Eating bugs every  day,
crossing the road is a hurdle.
that I face in May.




Brian strand's 4 line rhyme contest
cory long

animalsrhyme

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 30, 2011 at 5:05 AM

A belated congratulations Cory on your win in Brian Strand's "One Single Four Line" contest. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

May 24, 2011 at 9:25 PM

extraordinary subject, cory.. congrats to you, big time! :) huggs

Matt Hunt

May 24, 2011 at 9:22 PM

Congrats on your win Cory!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 24, 2011 at 4:34 PM

way to go cory... congrats on your super win in Brian's contest with this lovable entry my friend..so happy u won ..enjoy with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 24, 2011 at 2:18 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of brian, cory

Andrea Dietrich

May 24, 2011 at 2:10 PM

I'm glad to see this on the winners' list, Cory. I certainly rememeber this cutie! Congrats to you.

Ralph Taylor

May 24, 2011 at 11:39 AM

Congrats on your win, Cory. Great write. Nice going. Ralph

Francine Roberts

May 24, 2011 at 11:25 AM

cute one Cory, congrats on your win in the contest.............Francine

Jack Horne

May 24, 2011 at 10:12 AM

LOL Many congrats on your win, Cory : )

Carolyn Devonshire

May 24, 2011 at 9:46 AM

So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Cory. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

May 23, 2011 at 11:00 PM

This is very cute and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for your comment today. Good luck in this contest. Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

May 22, 2011 at 7:47 PM

Very cute entry, Cory. At least turtles have learned to live a slow and easy life, but that's not an asset when trying to cross the road! Best wishes in Brian's contest. Love, Carolyn

Delysia Hendricks

May 22, 2011 at 7:41 PM

lol. Only a special person could see the plight of animals we insensitives tend to ignore. Good luck with the contest. May you come out tops!! ^__^

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 22, 2011 at 7:08 PM

well I tend to agree cory and this is a neat entry full of imagery to glean my friend..good luck in the contest with this unique and original piece luv..

Gwendolen Song

May 22, 2011 at 6:58 PM

Hey Cory...this is so fun...a turtle rhyme! Good luck with Brian's contest. Hope it won't go real s----l----o---w---! Like a turtle. ha ha. Just kiddin. Gwendolen

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