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Turning Water Into Wine

Refreshing water. Wine Creator only prayed. Grapes hung heads in praise. Note: May be considered Senryu...What do you think?

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/10/2009 6:38:00 PM

sounds goood to me, I am no expert, haiku are about nature and senryu are about people -at least that is my understanding:)

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/10/2009 10:15:00 AM

Amazing work, reads like something I would have written, nice work...Raul

Isa Mahrie

Date: 10/10/2009 6:40:00 AM

simple with intresting lastline .... make -people wonder ..... also thanks on my work comment Marty

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2009 4:08:00 AM

I am not one to give an expert opinion on what form or technique. All I can do is say if I like it or not. I like the way that you put the Biblical into the poem. I do think that the plants, animals and all of nature praise him. Thank you for your comments on my work. I just felt like having a little laughter. Keep wriiting. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/9/2009 11:30:00 PM

A very spiritual, uplifting senryu, Martin. Makes me want to hang my head in praise and thanks as well. God bless you for reminding me that miracles are in the hands of our Creator. Love, Carolyn