Turning Tide

tranquil bleached shoreline
ripping roaring foaming tide
black brackish seaweed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 9:26 PM
oooh, cool imagery AND alliterations!
Cheeseman Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 3:39 AM
Great feeling in this
Shango Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 2:31 PM
I love the sea shores anytime, it gives the feel of pure adventure ... good description of it too. Happy new year
Laan Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 3:56 PM
Beautiful images Stephen. I love the bleached shoreline and the alliteration of ripping roaring and then the black brackish, beautiful haiku.
Mehta Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 2:11 PM
The alliteration boosts the thought with nice images, Stephen
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