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Turning Slow

Turning slow and twisting deeper changes lurk and often seep holding litmus ever tighter lifting hope above the light crystal snifter's promise linger soft tip curls of comfort lain precious hues sifting yellow warming up unto the pain wistful songs fill out the chasm drinking in dark shades of blue shifting winds drift off the boundary rampant bids the night adieu

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/31/2017 7:52:00 AM
I don't have a clue what you just said... but you said it beautifully!
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Date: 8/27/2017 6:34:00 AM
You know I love a good rhyme and this is no exception ---- flows as smooth as a baby's butt....you did well Timmy
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Date: 8/24/2017 7:35:00 AM
Beautiful rhythm and flow--well done, Tim!
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Date: 8/24/2017 6:06:00 AM
Full of ,melancholy, wonderful poem!
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Date: 8/23/2017 6:55:00 PM
A melancholy feel to your lovely write Tim. Your words are beautifully put together :)
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Date: 8/23/2017 5:02:00 PM
So wistful. It seems full of hope yet it makes me sad.
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Jean Murray
Date: 8/23/2017 6:30:00 PM
That's a lovely image Tim.
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/23/2017 5:04:00 PM
There is hope Jean. It as if you are looking at a beautiful swan.

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