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Turning Colder

Familiar storm - stampeding, impeding,
drawing in colder days, lighting up
monotone skies, winterizing holiday rise.

Thoughts of yesteryear - their existence
unclear, relegating nonsensical notions,
subjugating my mind - celebrating life.

12/18/2021
Bite Size Poem #30
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Paige Hind August 20, 2024 at 4:42 PM Glad you can celebrate life. :) <3

Caren Krutsinger December 28, 2021 at 4:31 AM This poem grabbed me up and ran so fast, I missed the context the first time, so I had to slow down and reread it. Thank you for making me think. Kim Rodrigues December 28, 2021 at 11:29 AM And thank you for reading! :)

Victor Buhagiar December 18, 2021 at 9:25 AM You bet it's getting cold and the first two months of the year will be worse. Nothing going. Lovely bitesize poem. Yuletide greetings. Kim Rodrigues December 18, 2021 at 11:34 AM Thank you, my wonderful friend! This weekend in Georgia is supposed to get cold. Joy to you, in Jesus! :) Kim Rodrigues December 18, 2021 at 11:34 AM Thank you, my wonderful friend! This weekend in Georgia is supposed to get cold. Joy to you, in Jesus! :)

L Milton Hankins December 18, 2021 at 9:25 AM Kim, I really enjoyed reading your poem for Line's contest. See Soup Mail. Kim Rodrigues December 18, 2021 at 10:49 AM Thank you so much!