Turning Colder

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Familiar storm - stampeding, impeding, drawing in colder days, lighting up monotone skies, winterizing holiday rise. Thoughts of yesteryear - their existence unclear, relegating nonsensical notions, subjugating my mind - celebrating life. 12/18/2021 Bite Size Poem #30 Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/28/2021 4:31:00 AM

This poem grabbed me up and ran so fast, I missed the context the first time, so I had to slow down and reread it. Thank you for making me think.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2021 11:29:00 AM

And thank you for reading! :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/18/2021 9:25:00 AM

Kim, I really enjoyed reading your poem for Line's contest. See Soup Mail.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2021 10:49:00 AM

Thank you so much!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/18/2021 9:25:00 AM

You bet it's getting cold and the first two months of the year will be worse. Nothing going. Lovely bitesize poem. Yuletide greetings.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2021 11:34:00 AM

Thank you, my wonderful friend! This weekend in Georgia is supposed to get cold. Joy to you, in Jesus! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2021 11:34:00 AM

Thank you, my wonderful friend! This weekend in Georgia is supposed to get cold. Joy to you, in Jesus! :)