Turning

The roaring flames of burning hopes
Mirrored in your teary eyes
The evill gaze of a merciless devil
Burns down the man inside

Weightless ash of a forgiving heart
Flies toward the hollow sky
Boiling rage and lust for vengeance
Laughing through your helpless cry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Capitano Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 4:59 AM
Whoa! Seems a little vindictive but I would never condemn for that desire. Keep up the good work.
Moth Avatar
December 25, 2018 at 12:20 AM
Thanks. It's just fiction. Im not the revenge type.
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