Turn Around

Lost in every way, Almost every day,
Watch me disengage, Freed from this rage,
Yet locked in this cage, Ending in sorrow, 
it will be better tommorrow, Atleast I hope so,
Pick yourself back up slow, Then you can just go,
I will never rid myself from pain, 
So theres nothing to gain, 
Here's where I would start to explain,
I'm the one to take the blame, 
Thats right, I'm not affriad to claim it,
I'm the one that makes you feel like this,
Even though I've done all these things to the fullest mass,
I'd do anything to change it, And make a positive turn around fast.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/1/2011 4:19:00 PM
You are a man of courage Scott. Be free my friend.
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Date: 5/31/2011 12:14:00 PM
Nice expressive thoughts to get rid of pain Scott. The best thing is you are turning around to jump in to positive thoughts. Nice rhyming poem. I will read your poems again. I see you in Poetry Soup. I am learning a lot by joining this website. And I love the positive comments I got from the veterans. Thank you for your positive comments. Dalila
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Date: 5/31/2011 11:58:00 AM
Welcome to the Soup, Scott, and thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I will enjoy seeing your work ! This piece reflects someone willing to make a positive change. Good luck! :) Carrie
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:03:00 AM
excellent emotional expressions in your lines Scott.. feeling it much... keep up the fantastic work and let the creative juices flow luv..
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Date: 5/31/2011 4:51:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Scott. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2011 3:18:00 AM
wow scott intense poem luv*Skat
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Date: 5/30/2011 11:03:00 PM
beautiful poem with an open feel ! Great synchronization of words ! Grace your time on my poetry if you wish to .
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Date: 5/30/2011 9:35:00 PM
nice words. Keep digging deep in your soul. Even if it hurts ripping out the painful cancers of every day life. You are young, or so it seems. But young writers are often the best writers. ~JSLambert Esquire
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Date: 5/30/2011 7:58:00 PM
lOVEE IT
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