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Turberlance

white capping turberlance mirrors the distress of my soul... Seagulls ride the wind caught in their delight peace and joyful moments... all distress takes flight Written Friday, June 07, 2013

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Date: 7/6/2013 11:11:00 PM
a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda
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Date: 6/24/2013 3:09:00 AM
I agreed with all the comments below. Well done Sara. AO
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Date: 6/21/2013 5:42:00 PM
I agree with Andrea, the contrast between the two Haiku is tremendous and simply a wonderful sight! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 6/21/2013 3:47:00 PM
amazing poetry Sara,,
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Date: 6/21/2013 3:11:00 PM
hey, great contrast of the turbulence and then the delight!! Nicely done, Sara.
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Date: 6/21/2013 2:21:00 PM
Sarahi's is absolutely excellent. This Haiku is expressed in one beautiful breath. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/21/2013 1:42:00 PM
beautiful write here, Sara
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