Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

Turberlance

white capping turberlance
mirrors the distress of my soul...
Seagulls ride the wind

caught in their delight
peace and joyful moments...
all distress takes flight

  

Written Friday, June 07, 2013

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Poet Destroyer A July 6, 2013 at 11:11 PM a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda

Abdulhafeez Oyewole June 24, 2013 at 3:09 AM I agreed with all the comments below. Well done Sara. AO

Russell Sivey June 21, 2013 at 5:42 PM I agree with Andrea, the contrast between the two Haiku is tremendous and simply a wonderful sight! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

Harry Horsman June 21, 2013 at 3:47 PM amazing poetry Sara,,

Andrea Dietrich June 21, 2013 at 3:11 PM hey, great contrast of the turbulence and then the delight!! Nicely done, Sara.

Connie Gildersleeve June 21, 2013 at 2:21 PM Sarahi's is absolutely excellent. This Haiku is expressed in one beautiful breath. Warm Smiles, Connie

Jack Horne June 21, 2013 at 1:42 PM beautiful write here, Sara