Shani Fassbender Poet Verse

Tunnel Vision

Headlights on? Tunnel ahead
Keep claustrophobia at bay
"Only way to get there", he said
"You know I don't like this", I said
Brake lights flashing to my dismay
Panic arises, heart beats wild
Taking deep breath and start to pray
His punishment won't be mild



Written by: Shani Fassbender
for the Contest:  "Hutain This One!"

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Lee Ramage August 4, 2011 at 8:38 PM Congratulations on your win. Well done. Lee

Dr.Ram Mehta August 4, 2011 at 1:33 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Shani

Jack Horne August 4, 2011 at 11:42 AM Wow, so many contest results again! Many congrats for all your wins : )

Carol Sunshine Brown August 4, 2011 at 9:24 AM Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Hutain" contest Shani. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich August 3, 2011 at 11:45 PM oooh, very interesting way you took it. Yes, a tunnel very well can fit that picture. Congratulations, Shani!

Debbie Guzzi August 3, 2011 at 8:12 PM LOL, I'm getting cataracts! Sometimes I swear that's what I see when I'm driving! Congrad's Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 3, 2011 at 5:37 PM congrats Shani on exciting win in Hutain contest with these amazing lines luv...kudos to u..

Caryl Ramsdale August 3, 2011 at 3:28 PM Congratulations on your win in the HUTAIN THIS ONE...contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud. Good job! Blessings, Caryl

Jack Horne July 29, 2011 at 1:21 PM Wow, it made my heart beat faster just reading this one! Lovely piece, Shani

Nette Onclaud July 27, 2011 at 12:02 PM thank you for joining shani... a searing piece which i will relish and decide on come judging time..:) huggs, nette