Tunnel

I go through the tunnel to see more
I aint quite sure how much more i can endure

Its dark and depressing
The woods i am guessing

Im lost in this world of darkness
Im going through it in a depressing mess

The darkness is messing with my mind
Its become hard to even be kind

Forgive me everyone for what i have become
I needed help and no one offered some

Understand that i am trying to get better
I let you know how it goes, after
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 28, 2009 at 2:49 PM
Couplet form here. And from one depressed person to another..FORCE yourself OUT into the sunshine and exercise. PS I KNOW how hard this is to do I'm nagging me too! Light & Love and OH help someone else, that usually works!
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