Tunnel

I enter the tunnel,
Not willing to turn back,
To be named a coward.

I walk through it slowly,
Not knowing what’s ahead,
Just knowing what’s behind.

The tunnel is near black,
Cold, empty and lifeless.
My breath is all I hear.

I can’t see the end.
It’s like it’s infinite,
My tread lasting decades.

Finally, I see it.
My journey is finished.
My prize is in my sight.

But all I see is white,
A blinding glare of it.
I can’t see what it is.

Well, I’ve spent all this time…
Might as well walk right in.
For the end can’t be worse.

As I walk through I see,
What have longed to receive
From my endless journey.

Not wealth nor power nor fame,
I have gained far, far, more.
I now have-...


4/23/18
For the "Tunnel Vision" Contest
Sponsored by Kai Michael Neumann
I used 6-6-6 syllable tercets for this poem, no rhyme scheme.
Hope you enjoy!
Fifth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Neumann Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 2:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. A wonderful poem. It reminds me of the story of Plato's Cave. Have a good journey and many kind wishes, Kai
Loaifhshfasjkh Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Thanks for the placement! Many wishes to you as well!
Canerdy Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 1:08 PM
Well-done, Connor. CONGRATS! Janice
Loaifhshfasjkh Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Thanks Janice! :D
Gentry Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 12:56 PM
Congratulations on your win with this tunnel vision poem.
Loaifhshfasjkh Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 3:44 PM
:D
Gauthier Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 6:58 AM
Courage ! Well done, Connor. Congrats on your win.
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