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Tunnel

I enter the tunnel, Not willing to turn back, To be named a coward. I walk through it slowly, Not knowing what’s ahead, Just knowing what’s behind. The tunnel is near black, Cold, empty and lifeless. My breath is all I hear. I can’t see the end. It’s like it’s infinite, My tread lasting decades. Finally, I see it. My journey is finished. My prize is in my sight. But all I see is white, A blinding glare of it. I can’t see what it is. Well, I’ve spent all this time… Might as well walk right in. For the end can’t be worse. As I walk through I see, What have longed to receive From my endless journey. Not wealth nor power nor fame, I have gained far, far, more. I now have-... 4/23/18 For the "Tunnel Vision" Contest Sponsored by Kai Michael Neumann I used 6-6-6 syllable tercets for this poem, no rhyme scheme. Hope you enjoy! Fifth Place

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Date: 5/21/2018 2:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. A wonderful poem. It reminds me of the story of Plato's Cave. Have a good journey and many kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 5/21/2018 3:46:00 PM
Thanks for the placement! Many wishes to you as well!
Date: 5/20/2018 1:08:00 PM
Well-done, Connor. CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 5/21/2018 3:46:00 PM
Thanks Janice! :D
Date: 5/20/2018 12:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this tunnel vision poem.
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Date: 5/21/2018 3:44:00 PM
:D
Date: 5/20/2018 6:58:00 AM
Courage ! Well done, Connor. Congrats on your win.
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