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Written on December 30, 2023

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Tune of Tears

In passing, hearts risk their very essence, their colors, their breathe,
Love who touched the soul, then moved on, toward heaven’s hungry light,
Souls soon reflect the love and peace found when passing into God’s light
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Goldsmith Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 8:50 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write/great picture/great title. Have a blessed day writing away..................
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 11:16 AM
Congratulations for your win, dear Gina. Were these souls who died part of your family this past year? Your title was beautifully compelling
Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 7:32 PM
Especially love that last line!
Empress Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 3:09 AM
Wow what an excellent sijo! I am still thinking of writing too for this, i really love your title “ tune of tears” that can be a brilliant prompt too . And i love how youve written “ Love who touched the soul, then moved on, toward heaven’s hungry light,“ i remember this year you did lose some loved ones, and it can be hard, and you’ve written about that very well. “Souls soon reflect the love and peace found when passing into God’s light” i sense positivity and faith that all is in Gods hands.
Empress Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 3:09 AM
Best wishes for the contest and sending you light always. Pleasure reading your work always and grateful always for your kind and generous support
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