Tune of Tears

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Written on December 30, 2023

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In passing, hearts risk their very essence, their colors, their breathe, Love who touched the soul, then moved on, toward heaven’s hungry light, Souls soon reflect the love and peace found when passing into God’s light

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/9/2024 8:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write/great picture/great title. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2024 11:16:00 AM

Congratulations for your win, dear Gina. Were these souls who died part of your family this past year? Your title was beautifully compelling

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/30/2023 7:32:00 PM

Especially love that last line!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/30/2023 4:20:00 PM

your title was perfect, Regina. I liked the last line, 'souls reflect the love and peace found when passing into God's light." A masterpiece, Gina. Have a great evening, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 12/30/2023 3:09:00 AM

Wow what an excellent sijo! I am still thinking of writing too for this, i really love your title “ tune of tears” that can be a brilliant prompt too . And i love how youve written “ Love who touched the soul, then moved on, toward heaven’s hungry light,“ i remember this year you did lose some loved ones, and it can be hard, and you’ve written about that very well. “Souls soon reflect the love and peace found when passing into God’s light” i sense positivity and faith that all is in Gods hands.

Ink Empress
Date: 12/30/2023 3:09:00 AM

Best wishes for the contest and sending you light always. Pleasure reading your work always and grateful always for your kind and generous support