Tun Sun Hidden Guise Horizons Dusk- -
sun dark afternoon
so distant, pale planet hides
in spite of the light
~
so good afternoon
rests behind Jupiter's guise
planet rides in spite
~
on top of the world
long heavens gray horizon
in spite of the dusk
1/7/20
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. ©2020
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