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Tulog:Sleep

tulog
nahan ka?
~nananaginip...


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sleep
where are you?
~dreaming...



**Sept. 11, 2010
just me tossing ideas in Filipino
...I need to be writing for something else ;)

lifehaiku

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Carol Sunshine Brown

November 22, 2011 at 11:53 AM

Congratulations on your win in Sidney's "Any New or old haiku Will do" contest Nikko. Love, Carol

John Freeman

November 21, 2011 at 10:04 AM

Love it Nikko, beautiful, Congratulations on your poem win. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 19, 2011 at 9:14 PM

Congrats Nikko on a stunning win for this excellent poetry sweetie..luv..

David Williams

November 19, 2011 at 11:46 AM

Nikko congrats on your win, i love this dual language, more please..David

Andrea Dietrich

November 19, 2011 at 8:42 AM

It's fun seeing this golden oldie, Nikko. Congrats on your win though the placement wasn't as high as I'd have liked to see! Luv, Andrea

Gwendolen Song

November 19, 2011 at 7:17 AM

I wish u would do more of these double translations, darling. I love it. It reminds me of dear Gert whom hasn't been around lately. Remember how he'd do a lil Spanish and German...? Anyways,....this is a cute haiku. Congrats...Gwendolen

Skat A

November 19, 2011 at 12:07 AM

NICE NIKKO, Congrats in my contest~SID

De R

September 21, 2011 at 1:46 PM

Were you writing this at 3 AM? This sounds so funny! "sleep where are you? ~dreaming"...:))

Olajide Adelana

October 11, 2010 at 12:25 PM

Lol, I love this. Soupmail

Debbie Guzzi

October 10, 2010 at 5:45 PM

ahhhh good one!!! Thanks for all your nice comments. Light & Love just like you!

Kris Walters

September 13, 2010 at 6:49 PM

elusive sleep... beautifully deep! Nicely done Nikko! Hugs, Kris

Andrea Dietrich

September 13, 2010 at 12:15 AM

soupmail. And a fav for this one too!

Andrea Dietrich

September 12, 2010 at 11:50 PM

oh, wow, very short but MOST profound!!! good one, NIkko!!!

Andrea Dietrich

September 12, 2010 at 11:50 PM

I like what Chris was talking about here too. My haiku contest, when I have it, will include traditional AND modern!

Susan Palli

September 12, 2010 at 6:54 AM

Loved it!!

Thvia Shetley

September 11, 2010 at 3:47 PM

This is great, you should do more of it! I have been encouraged to write more poetry in broad Scots... it's definitely fun but I really didn't think it would appeal to many. It seems I was wrong... and after reading this I understand why! Love.