Tsunami Haiku

receding tide. . .
darkened sea with
much debris



Note:
I live in Hawaii and wanted to let everyone know that our Tsunami warning has been 
lifted and we were blessed with no damage. Our prayers go out to those in Chile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 9/28/2010 3:34:00 AM
a strong poem, Connie I know this message has passed but i'm glad the news was lifted off Hawaii's shoulder.. Nice to see you are from such a beautiful island state. Sorry about them Tsunami. Later,..p.d.
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Date: 3/13/2010 4:09:00 PM
Reminds me of nights on the beach. Nice going. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/4/2010 3:10:00 PM
Glad you re fine dear friend..God bless you..Charma
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Date: 2/27/2010 6:51:00 PM
Connie. Well said. Thank God everything went well in Hawaii. Now, may Chile see better days. Blessings and thanks for your comments on my stuff. David
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Date: 2/27/2010 6:25:00 PM
a very visionary write... hope all the victims of this tsunami will be better
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Date: 2/27/2010 6:23:00 PM
I was thinking of u today Connie and so happy the news was good for your home State.. a tragedy in Chile ..yes.. so sad.. and I was so concerned about Hawaii too.. so happy that your lovely State was spared.. appreciate your Haiku of perfect description... thankxxx be to God for He is good... enjoyed your poetry tonight..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/27/2010 5:02:00 PM
GREAT job with this haiku that the tsunami inspired.I am so glad Hawaii is safe! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/27/2010 4:59:00 PM
That is wonderful news, Connie! While we are deeply saddened by the tragedy that struck Chili, I was dismayed when I heard the earthquake had set off tsunamis headed in your direction. Thank goodness you have been spared. Blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 2/27/2010 4:56:00 PM
Oh, wow, Connie, dear friend, Thank God and we do pray for those in Chile! Peace, love, Audrey
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