Notes About The Poem
I did this for Jo Daniels contest i originally
Titled it tri-metrical..But have altered it to try-metrical
Playing on phonetics trying to cover two descriptions
With one word..Maybe it'll work let me know what
You reckon.? All blessings.)
Try-metrical '
A tireme was set to sail
Yet wind failed; to blow
Deploy oars it never fails
Once far enough out
Again they raised the canvas.'
The wind came as a !shout
The ship creaked and drove
The sails bellied so freely
Twas as when sins are shrove'
The cox'n sounded the bell
All the crew yelled and cheered
Music to a capt'ns ears i hear tell.?
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