Trying To Say I Love You

Saying it with my hands
By doing all I can

Saying it with my arms
By holding a helpful plan

Saying  it with my face
By smiling through my tears

Trying to say "I love you"
Trying, but no one hears.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 6:03 AM
Good writing. Sara
Spence Sr Avatar
July 7, 2009 at 2:51 PM
I like the essence of this poem. It flows very well and sends a touching message. Try saying it softly with a silky hug. Great job! ~Joseph
Brown Avatar
July 7, 2009 at 4:28 AM
Sad but an excellent write. Love, Carol
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