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Trying To Say I Love You

Saying it with my hands By doing all I can Saying it with my arms By holding a helpful plan Saying it with my face By smiling through my tears Trying to say "I love you" Trying, but no one hears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/9/2009 6:03:00 AM
Good writing. Sara
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Date: 7/7/2009 2:51:00 PM
I like the essence of this poem. It flows very well and sends a touching message. Try saying it softly with a silky hug. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 7/7/2009 4:28:00 AM
Sad but an excellent write. Love, Carol
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