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Trying To Hold On

Lying still Sans motion Clouded sky Heavy emotion Starless Night Painful separation Trying to hold on Stagnant life She has moved on Precious memories Everyday delusion Burning flame Blinded vision Trying to hold on I took a moment and penned this song I have been waiting to say it for a long I am trying to hold on Yes, I am weak Never was strong Just wanted to be with you all my life long I am trying to hold on

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/30/2011 6:08:00 PM
thanks dan if u get the chance read Angel of Mercy...of all the poems i wrote i like it the most
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Date: 11/30/2011 11:55:00 AM
I had to come back to this...I love it! And I'm going to make it a Fav...
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Date: 11/17/2011 11:48:00 AM
Very nice write! But how long are you going to hold on?It may be wiser to let her go and find a new love to fill your life...Keep writing!
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Date: 11/5/2011 7:36:00 AM
Heartfelt and emotional read delivered with style! Thank you for sharing!
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Date: 11/5/2011 7:35:00 AM
Hold On!
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