Trying To Breath

Trying to breath under the shadows of love
Sinking to the pools of feelings
Driven by the motions of joyful heart
Feeling high with the emotions of a hurting soul
Still dreaming of the fantasy love cripple with fear
For the future is kneeling to the grieving heart
Enticed by shame to let go of the burning desire for lust
Save me...save me from drowning to this cold pool
For tonight I want to gallop through the plains of love
I want to assuage every pain to your halo heart
Let me breath the same breath as you ...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 21, 2015 at 5:51 PM
ZAKHE:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~
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September 5, 2014 at 1:39 PM
Zakhe, this is sweet, and caring... , I loved this, the feeling of just wanting to write your true emotions...LINDA
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September 9, 2014 at 12:51 PM
Thanks ..sometimes the emotions just cover my tiny brain like a rat caught on the trap, so I try to use every moment to say what my wounded soul feel.
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