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Trying To Breath

Trying to breath under the shadows of love Sinking to the pools of feelings Driven by the motions of joyful heart Feeling high with the emotions of a hurting soul Still dreaming of the fantasy love cripple with fear For the future is kneeling to the grieving heart Enticed by shame to let go of the burning desire for lust Save me...save me from drowning to this cold pool For tonight I want to gallop through the plains of love I want to assuage every pain to your halo heart Let me breath the same breath as you ...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/21/2015 5:51:00 PM
ZAKHE:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/5/2014 1:39:00 PM
Zakhe, this is sweet, and caring... , I loved this, the feeling of just wanting to write your true emotions...LINDA
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Zakhe Michael Mcunu
Date: 9/9/2014 12:51:00 PM
Thanks ..sometimes the emotions just cover my tiny brain like a rat caught on the trap, so I try to use every moment to say what my wounded soul feel.

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