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Pearl studded gate looms The Alpha Omega speaks “Welcome home my child” Nathan Bane Leccese ©All Rights Reserved 05/26/2009

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Date: 5/31/2009 3:36:00 PM
i can imagine a beautiful heaven--wonderful--charma
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Date: 5/30/2009 4:24:00 PM
Very nice image of the pearly gates, Nate. Poems with the same syllable scheme as haikus that don't deal with nature are senryus. Great poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/30/2009 1:38:00 PM
Nathan, this haiku IS about nature! It expresses recognition of our Creator; the Creator of all NATURE. And, of His creation's desire to commune with Him, then, to ultimately rest in His presence! I love it! Donna
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Date: 5/30/2009 1:29:00 PM
Great imagery of the great beyond. ice work your work is heading in an awesome direction...Raul
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Date: 5/30/2009 12:20:00 PM
Good write of going home to the pearly gates...good work.
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